Sunday, June 8, 2014

Day 6: Capacity for Violence


Today’s Prompt: A basket floats down a stream, lodging on a rock in front of a child who runs crying to his parents about the contents.
— Courtesy: Writing.Com

Word Count: 1,171
Phillip and Marge Udra were puzzled by the single content of the picnic basket.
            “There’s gotta be some sort of explanation for this,” Phillip said.
            “I think it’s the kids upstream playing dirty pranks,” Marge said.
            “Don’t they know better than to mess with a child’s mindset?”
            “I say we ought to call the cops.”
And that’s what they did. The cops came, sirens blaring. When they arrived they combed the entire area for the pranksters but found none. The police car driver recalled seeing some kids running off into the distance as they turned into the park area.
            “That must have been our boys said the detective. Well, Ma’am, sir, you got nothing to worry about. I’m sure those troublemakers won’t make anymore trouble today, at least.”
            “Thanks, officer. I feel this was all for nothing. Sorry I brought you all the way down here for nothing.”
            “Any time. It’s my job, too.”
The officers left and the family was on their own again.
            “Why would anybody place such a grotesque object inside a picnic basket?” Marge asked.
I’ve lost my appetite, was all the reply Phillip gave.
The content of the basket had been handed over to the cops who recorded it as evidence. They took it away with them to Marge’s relief. She couldn’t shake the feeling there was more to the whole ordeal than kids playing pranks.

Several months passed and many waters passed under the bridge. Phillip and Marge and of course, Little Sam had all but forgotten about the gruesome picnic basket. Life returned to normal for the family. They’ve been back visiting at the park at the same spot where Little Sam who wasn’t so little anymore found the basket. The pranksters have never resurfaced again or maybe they did their best to lay low and out of sight.
June 16th was Little Sam’s birthday and there was a little gathering around the house. Mostly family members and a few friends. Marge had been up to her neck in activities trying to make things worked out when her phone began to ring.
            “Hello?”
            “Mrs. Udra is that you, Ma’am? Please, identify yourself.”
            “Who wants to know?”
            “It’s me, Detective Wilson,” The caller said. “Name rings a bell?”
            “Of course,” she said, and it awakened something crueler than fear within her.
            “Turn on your TV for a minute. Have you seen the news, lately?”
Now her tummy was roiling like a fierce river current. She fetched her husband and they turned on the bedroom TV, muffled the volume and watched as the camera showed many people gathered round a stream.
The image didn’t spark any immediate recollection until Marge saw the rock. The same rock where Little Sam had found the basket.
            “Police sources say the basket that could have saved Mene’s life was found lodging in this rock by a 4-year old boy whose contents the parents dismissed as pranks played by kids they however they did the reasonable thing calling in the cops…”
Phillip picked up the remote and turned off the TV set. Marge was sobbing quietly.
            “It wasn’t your fault, you know?”
            “It’s not the guilt. I had nothing to do with it and we called the cops, remember? Even they couldn’t figure it out. But the lady, Mene, whoever she was fought so hard to stay alive and we let her down. We gave pranksters credit for her struggles. All because we couldn’t see beyond our noses.”
            “Don’t say that. You know how all that blood tore Little Sam up. We couldn’t stand that. If we had spotted the basket ourselves, the story would be different.”
            “Would it?”
            “Don’t do this to yourself…”
Marge’s phone let out a shrill sound.
            “Who is that?”
            “The detective. Wilson. He informed me about the new,.” Marge said, checking the phone screen.
            “Hey? Who is this?” Phillip said. He’d taken the phone from Marge.
            “I suppose I’m talking to Phillip. Mr. Phillip?”
            “Yes. You should have called me and not Marge. She’s broken by the news.”
            “No, I’m not,” Marge said
            “I’m sorry. I thought it was her idea to call the cops the other day, it was right to let her know her responsible action had helped solved possible time of murder even before the autopsy came in. and by that we can also guess it wasn’t the suicide since she we found the top of her dress ripped and the size just about matches the one we took from the basket. Sorry, if she was bothered by the news.”
Phillip couldn’t remember who had suggested calling the cops but that was besides the point right now. He wanted to get off the phone and console his wife.
            “Look, officer, Detective, this isn’t a good time besides, Little Sam is throwing a birthday party and being teary-eyed hosts would be a wet blanket on the spirit of the occasion.”
            “That’s okay. Maybe, you can come over to the station tomorrow and we’ll go over the content of that basket once again. Fine by you?”
            “Fine,” Phillip said, through clenched teeth.
            “Sorry to be a killjoy. Say happy birthday to Little Sam for me. Bye.”
Phillip dropped the phone on the bed and pulled Marge into his arms. “Detective says we have to report to the station tomorrow and go over the basket story again.”
She gave no answer. Only sniffed and held on to Phillip. Little Sam’s birthday party was definitely over. The couple did their best and kept the smile plastered on their faces.

            “Little Sam found the basket, right?”
            “He was playing with his rubber duck when the basket came swimming downstream and lodged in the rock,” Phillip said.
They’d arrived at the Police Station about five minutes earlier.
            “You’re sure it wasn’t there before?”
            “No, Detective. Blood upsets Little Sam a lot. He can’t stand the sight of it. And when we left him there we didn’t see that basket or we wouldn’t let him stay,” said Marge.
            “I was going to ask that,” Detective Wilson said. “Tell me the whole story, the way it happened from the beginning.” He sat back and folded his arms.
            “Little Sam had come running to us where we were seated under the shade squealing, ‘blood, blood, blood,’” Phillip said. “Of course, our first thought was he’d hurt himself. But then we checked him and found no bruises. He was pointing to the stream so we followed him. When we got there it was just the way you saw it when you arrived.”
            “The basket with the bloody piece of cloth and the inscription HELP! scribbled in blood?”
            “Yes,” Marge said.
            “You saw nobody, nothing that aroused your curiosity?”
            “None whatsoever.”
            “Can I ask you a question, Detective?” said Marge
The Detective nodded. “Shoot!”
            “The girl they found in the stream, Mene was it? What happened to her?”
            “Raped, battered, dumped into the stream and left for dead. She tried to get help with that message but, we all know how the story ends.”


Eneh Akpan
June 6th, 2014



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